I hated this "thinking" in English class. At that time in my life I could care less about poems and Shakespeare. I was more interested in the girls sitting next to me or what went on after school. But now I look at this poem differently, comparing it to how I have come to see people go through life. In it and in others we all know and in ourselves, some apply themselves and some don't. Those who apply themselves have the potential to rise to the top or excel in what they choose to do.
Those faced with hardships can apply themselves and rise above and still perform and survive; no, more than survive, still manage to accomplish worthwhile goals. Others who wallow in self pity or simply coast through life will never be masters of their fate. They instead will always be affected by those who are able to rise up and accomplish something in life, i.e. their bosses, their leaders, the ones who take charge.
Those who are able to take charge "may" feel they are the master of their fate because they have gone through life with greater success, applying themselves, listening to those who they respect, taking advice, controlling their desires, limiting their behavior, applying themselves but the captain of their soul? You have to go deep into the individual to know more than what we are probably capable of seeing in another to grasp this. We are using words like fate and soul which are barely understood and we speak of them almost casually as if we are somehow greater, or great enough to look down from a superior position and discuss these concepts as if we are above them. So elevated is our "self", our sense of "self". We all feel this, both the accomplished and the not so accomplished.
In the Christianity that Christ teaches, "self" is the first thing that must be seen as being in the way of a relationship with the Father. A relationship that Christ came to demonstrate and make possible for everyone and anyone who seeks Him.
We don't have to seek Him. There is enough in life to keep us occupied. The Jews spoke of the Veil that separated them from God. I'm no scholar or theologian but I can perceive this Veil and at times I can and have perceived a life made possible by Christ that is touched by what Christ did for us when He made possible the piercing or tearing down of this Veil between us and God.
It matters not how strait the gate,
How charged with punishments the scroll.
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
It seems the author raises his fist to God:
"Because strait is the gate, and narrow is the way, which leadeth unto life, and few there be that find it" Matthew 7:14
For whatever reason, probably because of how much self still wants to be in control, we tend to look at or relate to these verses differently. I don't believe he found it. Have I found it?
This verse affected me at about the same age as the author who wrote this poem. I accepted it as truth. He doesn't seem to have. He says it doesn't matter. He also believes it matters not what is written in the "Book of Life". I have always believed that it does. If I can remember at times, something very obscure from my early childhood, if memories, lessons, knowledge can be brought to mind without even calling them up, sometimes even knowledge I did not posess in any way came to my aid when I called out for help, then I can not say it doesn't matter.
Who knows what is on the other side of the veil?
The author wrote: "Beyond this place of wrath and tears
Looms but the Horror of the shade," but he is unafraid.
He is willing to go through life under his own power, the master of his fate, unafraid. How can I hold anything against him or others who go through life as best they can, struggling, striving, and with desires and needs. I respect their courage, their fortitude and their accomplishments. But I look for more. I know there is a veil there, or once was. We can keep that veil in place or see what happens when it is taken down. The more I experience the unexplainable in life, those things that can be traced to faith and grace, the more my self becomes humbled and the more I want to know Him.
Christians are not perfect yet. That only will happen because of His second coming. But we are to be living according to what has been given to us. That includes Scriptures, the helping of the Holy Spirit, the gift of the five fold ministry, and to be committed to being a member of the body of Christ.
That doesn't mean just sitting in church each week. We have to be committed followers seeking that narrow way through that straight gate with His help and also by helping others. We should be sharing all we have been given, whether that is love or understanding or the love of helping others in service or giving of our wealth or giving of our self.
If as Christians, we for a moment think that we are the masters of our fate or the keepers of our soul, we deny Christ and all that He came to do.